Little Poetic Song, I came up with.
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Little Poetic Song, I came up with.iLhM  |
Posted: Nov 1 2009, 05:14 AM
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I'm in an emotional state, so I'd thought I'd vent out my feelings in a song (poem). Some lines are from songs, I'll admit that, but not all.
What do you think? No flaming / spam please. -------------------- She's a myth that I have to believe in...
All I need to make it real, is one more reason... - Slipknot: Vermillion (pt. 2) | Vol. 3 (Subliminal Verses) 2004 I still press your letters to my lips And cherish them in parts of me that savor every kiss - Slipknot: Snuff | All Hope Is Gone 2008 |
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| Anima |
Posted: Nov 1 2009, 07:16 AM
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not bad..
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Shyamora[SkS]  |
Posted: Nov 1 2009, 10:28 AM
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Well done Oo, can you point out which lines are from songs? >.<'
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Prince  |
Posted: Nov 1 2009, 06:05 PM
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the lines are either totally the same as from songs already made, or have some words changed, but the conception/ending word which rhymes is the same.
well, at least the first part which i bothered to look up. if the rest of the song is like that as well, mostly just copy/paste from other songs, then not good job. if it's not, then slightly good job. but im sure someone will care enough to examine your whole song and tell us which of the lines are 100% stolen, which are 90% copies and which are most likely your own. --------------------  |
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| Elencia |
Posted: Nov 1 2009, 10:34 PM
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its k, amir. its k.
its good you wanted to vent ihml, but the ST forums arent the place for that, as seen by the post before meeee -------------------- It is not enough to succeed. Others must fail.
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Posted: Nov 2 2009, 06:46 PM
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Deus Caritas Est Group: Members Posts: 60 Joined: 25-August 09 Member No.: 646 ID: StreetPreacher Clan: Grr Status: Offline |
Sounds emo.
-------------------- Luke 10:3
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